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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
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Is this paragraph ok?

I want to indicate my past experience in my resume. This is what I wrote:

June 17 – Present: Firmware Development Student, <company name>:

  • Development and maintenance of the testing and simulations environment inside the firmware.
  • Main programming language is C. Also a basic usage of Perl and Bash.
  • Working with Windows and Linux environments

<company name> was censored - it's just a name. Firmware Development Student is the name of my position and that's why the words in it start with capital letter.

Is this paragraph ok?

  

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It's better to start each point with a verb. More dynamic. To me, the word 'student' should be explained.

— Clive

  • It's better to start each point with a verb.
  • More dynamic.
  • To me, the word 'student' should be explained.
  • eg Are you actually a paid employee?
  • June 17 – Present: Firmware Development Student, <company name>: Develop and maintain the testing and simulations environment inside the firmware.
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It's better to start each point with a verb. More dynamic.

To me, the word 'student' should be explained. eg Are you actually a paid employee?

June 17 – Present: Firmware Development Student, <company name>:

  • Develop and maintain the testing and simulations environment inside the firmware.
  • Program mainly C. Also use basic Perl and Bash.
  • Work w
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