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Egyptian2007 Posted 19 years ago
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Is this paragraph OK?
0 Could anyone please rassure me that this paragraph is fine? 02 br
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01 i 00 "Equally important is the cultural factor and how it impacts on participants’ perceptions. Consistently with participants’ belief regarding the length of service as a requirement that qualifies teachers to take part in decision-making, school board members expect that they will be treated as professionals. Being senior members of staff who have been in service for long years, they believe that they deserve to be allowed to put their impact on the decision-making process and to have genuine influence on the decisions that are being made". 02 i 0-
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01 i 00 "Equally important is the cultural factor and how it impacts on participants’ perceptions. Consistently with participants’ belief regarding the length of service as a requirement that qualifies teachers to take part in decision-making, school board members expect that they will be treated as professionals. Being senior members of staff who have been in service for long years, they believe that they deserve to be allowed to put their impact on the decision-making process and to have genuine influence on the decisions that are being made". 02 i 0-
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01 b 00 Consistent 02 b 00 with participants’ belief 01 b 00 regarding length 02 b 00 of service 01 b 00 as a qualification for 02 b 00 teachers to take part in decision-making, school board members expect that they will be treated as professionals. 02 b 02 i 02 font 0-
- 01 b 00 Consistent 02 b 00 with participants’ belief 01 b 00 regarding length 02 b 00 of service 01 b 00 as a qualification for 02 b 00 teachers to take part in decision-making, school board members expect that they will be treated as professionals.
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0 I have tried to simplify it a bit, Egyptian; if your readers have to wade through a labyrinth of sentence structure, they won't bother to pay attention. 02 br
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01 font 01 i 00 Equally important is the cultural factor and how it impacts on participants’ perceptions. 01 b 00 Consistent 02 b 00 with par
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01 font 01 i 00 Equally important is the cultural factor and how it impacts on participants’ perceptions. 01 b 00 Consistent 02 b 00 with par
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0 Also note that it is "participant's" - the apostrophe goes before the 's' in both instances in the paragraph. 0-
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0 I believe there are several 01 i 00 participants 02 i 00 in this study, Tidus, so the apostrophe is correctly placed in the original. However, if there is only one, then it will require an article ( 01 i 00 a, the 02 i 00 ) as well as the apostrophe change. 0-
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