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Antonia Posted 21 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Is this paragraph OK?

Can you please check out this sentence and give me suggestions how to make it sound more natural?

It is a back and forth communication designed for reaching an agreement when you and the other party have some mutual interests and others (interests) which are different.

Thank you in advance
  

Top answer

Dear Antonia, It is a back and forth communication designed for reaching an agreement when you and the other party have some mutual interests and others (interests) which are different. » But it is perhaps a little clumsy. A moderator may make it better.

— Goldmund

  • Dear Antonia, It is a back and forth communication designed for reaching an agreement when you and the other party have some mutual interests and others (interests) which are different.
  • » But it is perhaps a little clumsy.
  • A moderator may make it better.
  • Kind regards, Goldmund
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Dear Antonia,

It is a back and forth communication designed for reaching an agreement when you and the other party have some mutual interests and others (interests) which are different.

«It is a two-way communication process, which is designed to help you reach an agreement when you and the other party have some, but not all, int
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Thank you Goldmund Emotion: smile,

(***, what was I thinking 'back and forth communication''
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I presume you are defining 'negotiation', Antonia.

A slightly compressed version, based on Goldmund's:

It is a two-way process designed for reaching an agreement when you and the other party have both mutual and differing interests.
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Yes, I think your version conveys the meaning I need. Thank you Davkett
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