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Msnake Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Is this paragraph grammar correct??
Dear ……
As our last conversation, however our company has just started for a short period, but we’re already growing with a fast speed on track, after one year preparation we already build up our company shape with a few projects on hand. We have a lot of different connection and we believe we will be one of the best within a short period. Please check attachment for our company proposal and planning for the coming few years.
If you have any question about the proposal please do not feel hesitate to contact me. Hope we would have a chance to work together in the future and hope to hear from you soon.
Best regards,
…
Thanks for the help.
As our last conversation, however our company has just started for a short period, but we’re already growing with a fast speed on track, after one year preparation we already build up our company shape with a few projects on hand. We have a lot of different connection and we believe we will be one of the best within a short period. Please check attachment for our company proposal and planning for the coming few years.
If you have any question about the proposal please do not feel hesitate to contact me. Hope we would have a chance to work together in the future and hope to hear from you soon.
Best regards,
…
Thanks for the help.
Top answer
HI!! we have already built up.... about the proposal, I will be glad to provide you with more information (I think it is sounds more formal), Hope we will have a chance in order to collaborate in the future.
- HI!!
- we have already built up....
- about the proposal, I will be glad to provide you with more information (I think it is sounds more formal), Hope we will have a chance in order to collaborate in the future.
- I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
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HI!! I think that it is better to say: ...but we are growing with fast pace...(you need present continuous- changing situation ), ....we have already built up.... (here present perfect- already most of the times goes with that tense), ....different connections (you need plural), and we hope that we will be one of the best within a short period of time, Please, check...(you need comma), ...for t
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