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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Is this paragraph good English?
Hi, i wonder if this paragraph is good English?
«These new detection methods can contribute to food safety by improving the success in predicting the potential production of toxins before they can be detected, thereby minimizing the risk of contamination.»
thanks!
«These new detection methods can contribute to food safety by improving the success in predicting the potential production of toxins before they can be detected, thereby minimizing the risk of contamination.»
thanks!
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Almost. I would make a couple of small changes and clarify the logic. These new detection methods can contribute to food safety by improving our ability to predict the success in predicting the potential production of toxins before they can otherwise be detected, thereby minimizing the risk of contamination.
- Almost.
- I would make a couple of small changes and clarify the logic.
- These new detection methods can contribute to food safety by improving our ability to predict the success in predicting the potential production of toxins before they can otherwise be detected, thereby minimizing the risk of contamination.
- the success in predicting is awkward and unclear.
- So I would replace it.
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Almost. I would make a couple of small changes and clarify the logic.
These new detection methods can contribute to food safety by improving our ability to predict the success in predicting the potential production of toxins before they can otherwise be detected, thereby minimizing the risk of contamination.
the success in predicting
These new detection methods can contribute to food safety by improving our ability to predict
the success in predicting
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