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As the combined hosts of Eltabbar, Tyraturos, and Pyarados marched north, Bareris, Tammith, and several griffon riders scouted ahead to watch for enemies and hazards created by the Spellplague. When the group reached the town of Solzepar, they discovered that blue fire had swept through the settlement and caused parts of the ground to float in the air. Bareris and his companions landed on one of the larger floating islands and searched a building that had been a chapterhouse of the Order of Evocation. They were soon attacked by a band of Red Wizards who the Spellplague had caused to be transformed and possessed by evocation spells, but they quickly fought their way out of the building and fled the island.