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For the next few weeks, the Wave Wyvern followed Greatorm’s ship as it sailed toward a small islet where Kleef and his comrades planned to trick the shades into running their vessel aground on a submerged reef. Throughout that time, Yder used his magic to enter Kleef’s dreams in an attempt to pressure the topsword into serving Shar by stealing the Eye. When the Lonely Roamer reached the islet, Kleef and the others managed to implement their plan successfully. When the Shadovar departed from the trapped Wave Wyvern on longboats to pursue Greatorm’s ship, Arietta, Kleef, and one of the other Marsember watchmen, Jang, boarded the vessel, killed the few shade warriors remaining aboard, and freed Elira as well as the imprisoned Seasilver guards.