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FYI- Aoth is the battle mage. After the assortment of Thayan soldiers, wizards, and clerics sent to defeat the undead host assembled in Pyarados under the command of Nymia, the governor’s army separated into several companies in order to eradicate the creatures as rapidly as possible. Nymia named Aoth as the captain of one of the contingents, and when his troops reached the small village of Dulos, they discovered that a band of undead had massacred its inhabitants and were occupying the settlement. Aoth’s force engaged and destroyed the marauders, and that night, the battle mage and Chathi Oandem, a priestess of Kossuth, became lovers.