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0 Can someone check my paragraph to see if all my grammer is correct i just want to see if i improve a little. 01b01u00Thanks! to those who correct my mistake02u02b02br
00 Writing is one of the powerful tools that a person can have because it expresses who we are as a person. It’s 00a key to achievement in school, in the workplace, 00Writing equips you with the communication and thinking skills you need to participate effectively in today democracy. 00 00In today society men and women have different way of writing. Men write sloppier and women write nicer. Women tend to have a better writing skill than men, because typically stereotype for women is that they are smart and they have good writing skill. Men tend to be more on an aggressive side when it comes to writing, because the way that they write is more like how men would write they would usually write in a tone that should sound like it should be written by men and not a woman. Women write beautiful handwriting and men write like a comic style writing. Therefore, Men and Women all have the same writing skill it’s not about who write better or not because some women may write like how men would write and some men may write like how women would write it’s just a stereotypical thing we have for how men and women write.00 0-
  

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02br 01i 00I have underlined some problem areas:02i 02br 02br 00 Writing is 01u 00one of the powerful02u 00 tools that a person can have because it expresses who 01u 00we are02u 00 as a person. 01u 00It’s02u 00 01span 00a key to achievement in school, in the workplace01u 00, 02u 02span 01span 01u 00Writing02u 00 equips you with the communication and thinking skills you need to participate effectively in 01u 00today02u 00 democracy. 00 00In01u 00 today02u 00 society men and women have different 01u 00way02u 00 of writing.

  • 02br 01i 00I have underlined some problem areas:02i 02br 02br 00 Writing is 01u 00one of the powerful02u 00 tools that a person can have because it expresses who 01u 00we are02u 00 as a person.
  • 01u 00It’s02u 00 01span 00a key to achievement in school, in the workplace01u 00, 02u 02span 01span 01u 00Writing02u 00 equips you with the communication and thinking skills you need to participate effectively in 01u 00today02u 00 democracy.
  • 00 00In01u 00 today02u 00 society men and women have different 01u 00way02u 00 of writing.
  • Men write sloppier and women write nicer.
  • Women tend to have 01del 00a02del 00 better writing skill than men, because 01u 00typically stereotype02u 00 for women is that they are smart 01u 00and they have good writing skill02u 00.
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