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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Is this paragraph correct?

Featuring super-cars and car reviews, mark your schedules for Top Gear USA as our hosts bring you even more exciting stunts and challenges with a splash of American humour!
  

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What do you think may be incorrect, please?
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I'm not comfortable with the word "our". Should I mention their names instead?
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That's not unusual or out of place in such an announcement, The announcer is trying to make it sound like he and the listeners are all eager to watch this program.
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Ok. Then, I think the paragraph is no grammatical mistakes.
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The sentence begins with a dangling participle. I'd italicise Top Gear USA.
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