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There are many hardships associated with attending college and being a parent. First and most

important it seems that no matter how hard you try to keep to a schedule and or priorities something

is always forgotten or seems to loose the attention that is deserves. In most cases the thing that seems

to lack the attention that they need or deserve are your children. Second there never seem to be enough

hours in the day to accomplish task set before you. Such as errands, house work, taking care of your children,

homework, and especially finding a moments peace. Then by the time you actually sit down to do your

homework you are so tired, that you can barely keep your eyes open and all you want to do is go to bed.

Which means many times your school work will not be the absolute best you could have possibly done. Last

but not least as always many of us have too many irons in the fire. So while sitting in class your mind is still

racing about everything that still needs to be done. Yes there are many hardships associated with attending

college and being a parent. Although when you have completed your degree many of the sacrifices you made

will seem well worth it compared your feeling of accomplishment.