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Over the past five years I have gained significant experience performing biomedical research in the area of medical devices and have been also involved in several clinical trial activities. These activities include the designing, planning and on-site monitoring of clinical studies, data collection and analysis, clinical reports preparation as well as provide technical support to resolve field issues. My professional experience coupled with advanced programming skills in MATLAB/Simulink, a computer proficiency in MS Office package and MS Project, and good knowledge and experience with statistics-related software such as R and SPSS make me particularly well suited for work in the biomedical industry.
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Hi, good job sanpal01 - that's a nice one - not much to correct here, but I'll try my best: Over the past five years I have gained significant experience conducting biomedical research in the area of medical devices and have been also involved in several clinical trial activities. These activities include designing, planning and on-site monitoring of clinical studies, data collection and analysis, clinical reports preparation, as well as providing technical support to resolve field issues. My professional experience, coupled with advanced programming skills in MATLAB/Simulink, proficiency in MS Office package and MS Project, and good knowledge and experience with statistics-related software such as R and SPSS, make me particularly well-suited to work in the biomedical industry.
- Hi, good job sanpal01 - that's a nice one - not much to correct here, but I'll try my best: Over the past five years I have gained significant experience conducting biomedical research in the area of medical devices and have been also involved in several clinical trial activities.
- These activities include designing, planning and on-site monitoring of clinical studies, data collection and analysis, clinical reports preparation, as well as providing technical support to resolve field issues.
- My professional experience, coupled with advanced programming skills in MATLAB/Simulink, proficiency in MS Office package and MS Project, and good knowledge and experience with statistics-related software such as R and SPSS, make me particularly well-suited to work in the biomedical industry.
- As you can see, I have made only a few slight changes.
- Good luck!
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Over the past five years I have gained significant experience conducting biomedical research in the area of medical devices and have been also involved in several clinical trial activities. These activities include designing, planning and on-site monitoring of clinical studies, data collection and
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