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Wojtek ka Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Is this one correct?

"Although she had been a student, she already started her professional career."

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Doesn't sound very correct to me. What are you trying to say? Two verbs, but when?

  • Doesn't sound very correct to me.
  • What are you trying to say?
  • Two verbs, but when?
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Doesn't sound very correct to me. What are you trying to say? Two verbs, but when?
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Hello, wojtek—and welcome to English Forums. In future, please put the text you wish to discuss in the message box, not in the subject line.

As it stands, your sentence offers a temporal conundrum, since both past perfect and 'already' indicate previous events: therefore, we wonder which came first, student or career? 'Although' indicates concession, but there is no concession in schoo
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Hi,

Your meaning is not very clear to me.

I assume she is no longer a student.
I assume she started her career while she was a student.

There are various ways to say this.
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Thank you Clive,
That is basically what I wanted to say. I am taking the second option though.
Thanks a million

wojtek
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Mister Micawber,

Thank you for explaining the difference between those two. I wanted to say: "She was a student when she began her professional career. (She was studying and working.)"
Thanks a million,
wojtek
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Thank you for you help,
cheers,
wojtek
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wojtek kaAlthough she had been a student, she already started her professional career
I would just exchange the tenses.

Although she was (still) a student, she had already started her professional career.

At least I think that's what you're aiming at.

CJ
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Calif Jim,

Does your sentence mean that she started her career before she was a student?
What I want to say is: she was a student and she supposed to start her professional work after finishing her studies. She was smart enough to start her academic career when she was still a student.

What do you think?
wojtek
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wojtek kaDoes your sentence mean that she started her career before she was a student?
No.
wojtek kaWhat I want to say is: she was a student and she supposed to start her professional work after finishing her studies. She was smart enough to start her academic career when she was still a student.
Right. That's what I though
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Thank you CJ,
Well, my understanding of the past perfect is poor, I see. Especially intriguing is the reason why you used past perfect in the second part of the sentence. I thought starting her studies happened before taking a job as a 'scholar', therefore first part of the sentence should have contained past perfect.
(By the way, she is not a student any more, but she still works as a 'sc

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