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Ryansamturner Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Is this okay? Construction.

'I stood like that for a while. Then, eventually, I gave up and moved on.'

Would you agree with the way I have made 2 sentences out of this or should it be one, and if so, how would you construct it.

Thanks.
  

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These are choices a writer has to make for himself. It sounds like you are writing first-person fiction or memoir. You can do it any way you like.

— Enoon

  • These are choices a writer has to make for himself.
  • It sounds like you are writing first-person fiction or memoir.
  • You can do it any way you like.
  • To answer your question, I see nothing wrong with what you've done there.
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These are choices a writer has to make for himself. It sounds like you are writing first-person fiction or memoir. You can do it any way you like. To answer your question, I see nothing wrong with what you've done there.
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