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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Is this okay?

Hello!

Is this sentence fine?

1895 marked the time when a new and significant period started in the history of our city.

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It's OK but a little awkward. Better is - 1895 marked the start of a new and significant period in the history of our city. Clive

  • It's OK but a little awkward.
  • Better is - 1895 marked the start of a new and significant period in the history of our city.
  • Clive
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It's OK but a little awkward.

Better is -
1895 marked the start of a new and significant period in the history of our city.

Clive

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