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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

Is this ok? Thanks !

0 Please keep an eye on the shipment. No any delay will accepted 0-
  

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0Hi,02br 02br 01font 00Please keep an eye on the shipment. 02font 02br 02br 00This grammar is OK, but the last sentence seems very abrupt, rude and even threatening. 02font 02br 02br 00 Best wishes, Clive0-

— Clive

  • 0Hi,02br 02br 01font 00Please keep an eye on the shipment.
  • 02font 02br 02br 00This grammar is OK, but the last sentence seems very abrupt, rude and even threatening.
  • 02font 02br 02br 00 Best wishes, Clive0-
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0Hi,02br
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01font00Please keep an eye on the shipment. No delay will be accepted.02font02br
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00This grammar is OK, but the last sentence seems very abrupt, rude and even threatening. You might want to make it more polite, eg 02br
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01font00Please keep an eye on the
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0 Thank you Clive! You are the best ~ 0-
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0I'm sorry, but I think when you said "No any delay will accepted" you may have meant "No delay..."02br
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00Of course, the comment above about it being rather abrupt would apply.0-
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