Is this OK or can it be improved?
Is this OK or can it be improved?
Hanna puts the phone down and sits depressed for a second, then restlessly gets up and leaves her room.
Top answer
It's OK. Most sentences can be improved, but you'd have to know how the sentence is going to be used in context to be sure you were improving it and not making it worse. I think it's fine, but it's your call whether you think it would better if it were different within the context you have planned for it.
- It's OK.
- Most sentences can be improved, but you'd have to know how the sentence is going to be used in context to be sure you were improving it and not making it worse.
- I think it's fine, but it's your call whether you think it would better if it were different within the context you have planned for it.
- CJ
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It's OK. Most sentences can be improved, but you'd have to know how the sentence is going to be used in context to be sure you were improving it and not making it worse.
I think it's fine, but it's your call whether you think it would better if it were different within the context you have planned for it.
CJ
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