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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Is this OK for my essay?
Mirroring the ideology of the WWF, had been that of The Conservation Foundation, which had such scientists as Charles Sutherland Elton as providing much support for Rachael Carson’s Silent Spring until the foundation had merged with the WWF in 1990.
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No, I'm afraid it's borderline incoherent. I think your basic statement is that the CF merged with the WWF in 1990. Start with that.
- No, I'm afraid it's borderline incoherent.
- I think your basic statement is that the CF merged with the WWF in 1990.
- Start with that.
- I think the reason for the merge may have been that the two organizations had similar ideologies.
- I have no idea what part CSE played in the merge, nor do I know how Rachel Carson fits in.
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No, I'm afraid it's borderline incoherent.
I think your basic statement is that the CF merged with the WWF in 1990. Start with that.
I think the reason for the merge may have been that the two organizations had similar ideologies.
I have no idea what part CSE played in the merge, nor do I know how Rachel Carson fits in. Her signature book, Silent Spring, was published thr
I think your basic statement is that the CF merged with the WWF in 1990. Start with that.
I think the reason for the merge may have been that the two organizations had similar ideologies.
I have no idea what part CSE played in the merge, nor do I know how Rachel Carson fits in. Her signature book, Silent Spring, was published thr
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