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He went to the door, put his ear to it, and listened. Suddenly he heard something that made him back away from the door.
Is this OK as it is or would you change anything?
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anonymous He went to the door, put his ear to it, and listened. Suddenly he heard something that made him back away from the door. Is this OK as it is or would you change anything?
- anonymous He went to the door, put his ear to it, and listened.
- Suddenly he heard something that made him back away from the door.
- Is this OK as it is or would you change anything?
- Do a global search in Word on "suddenly" when you are done writing whatever this is, and either delete it or change it to something that doesn't suck putrid gorilla meat.
- Also, you are the omniscient narrator, so it is not permitted to keep what he heard a secret from us.
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anonymousHe went to the door, put his ear to it, and listened. Suddenly he heard something that made him back away from the door.
Is this OK as it is or would you change anything?
Do a global search in Word on "suddenly" when you are done writing whatever this is, and either delete it or change it to something that doesn't suck putrid gori
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