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Anonymous Posted 5 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Is this OK?

Jack turns, goes back to Simon and glares furiously at him. Simon attempts to hold his glare but can't and looks down, obviously intimidated.


1) Is this OK?

2) Is it clear enough that Simon attempts to hold Jack's glare?

  
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