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Anonymous Posted 5 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Is this OK?
A chase.
Ted ran out of the stairwell and down the hall. Ben ran out into the hall as well, just in time to see Ted turn a corner.
1) Is this OK?
2) I feel it's a bit repetitive and long. How could I slim it down?
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