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Anonymous Posted 6 years ago
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Is this OK?
Is this OK? Is the wording natural? (I don't know the name of the town)
He lives in Argentina now where he owns an apartment located in an exclusive part of a town.
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anonymous Is this OK? Is the wording natural? I don't like it much.
- anonymous Is this OK?
- Is the wording natural?
- I don't like it much.
- "Located" is not necessary, and " a town" leaves me hanging.
- It's too vague.
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anonymousIs this OK? Is the wording natural?
I don't like it much. "Located" is not necessary, and "a town" leaves me hanging. It's too vague. If you don't know which town, you have to at least imply that more strongly, maybe "He lives in Argentina now where he owns an apartment in an exclusive part of some town" or "He lives somewhere in Argentina n
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