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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
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Is this ok?
Is this ok?
Talia comes back from the restroom and is met with the sight of her boyfriend dancing close with an attractive girl. She watches them for a moment, clearly not approving what she sees. She leaves.
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anonymous Is this ok? Yes. Here's my version if you'd like something to compare it with.
- anonymous Is this ok?
- Yes.
- Here's my version if you'd like something to compare it with.
- On returning from the restroom Talia sees her boyfriend slow dancing with a very attractive girl.
- She watches them for a moment, clearly not approving.
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anonymousIs this ok?
Yes. Here's my version if you'd like something to compare it with.
On returning from the restroom Talia sees her boyfriend slow dancing with a very attractive girl. She watches them for a moment, clearly not approving. She leaves.
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