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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
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Is this ok?
Through the closed drapes in her apartment, the usual morning rush can be seen going on outside the window.
Is this ok?
Can it be better?
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It's OK if the drapes are transparent or diaphanous.
- It's OK if the drapes are transparent or diaphanous.
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anonymousIs this ok?
Yes.
anonymousCan it be better?
Yes.
Through the closed drapes in her apartment, the usual morning rush can be seen going on.
(Drapes cover a window, so "out the window" is a bit redundant. Also, we assume that the drapes are made of a see-through material like gauze. )
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