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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Is this ok?

If I just can read your mind no doubt no confusion no conclusion has been made but apparently i cant do that. And here I am full of Regrets ! and hurting myself for no reason!
  

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Hi I'd say some commas, some care with the capitals and I'd put just after 'can'. Apart from that, it's good: - If I can just read your mind, no doubt, no confusion, no conclusion has been made, but apparently I can't do that. And here I am full of regrets and hurting myself for no reason!

  • Hi I'd say some commas, some care with the capitals and I'd put just after 'can'.
  • Apart from that, it's good: - If I can just read your mind, no doubt, no confusion, no conclusion has been made, but apparently I can't do that.
  • And here I am full of regrets and hurting myself for no reason!
  • Dave
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Hi

I'd say some commas, some care with the capitals and I'd put just after 'can'. Apart from that, it's good:

- If I can just read your mind, no doubt, no confusion, no conclusion has been made, but apparently I can't do that. And here I am full of regrets and hurting myself for no reason!

Dave

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