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Carter Lee Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing
Is this natural expression?
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I'd like to say to someone about relocation as below. but I'm not sure about the expression. Would you please give me a hand ?
"I want to locate because of the excellent opportunity I feel this role & responsibilities I am very interested in the responsibilities and believe that it warrants my relocation, also, it gives the multiple experiences interact with the different people in different locations. I strongly believe that this is right decision."
I'd like to say to someone about relocation as below. but I'm not sure about the expression. Would you please give me a hand ?
"I want to locate because of the excellent opportunity I feel this role & responsibilities I am very interested in the responsibilities and believe that it warrants my relocation, also, it gives the multiple experiences interact with the different people in different locations. I strongly believe that this is right decision."
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There are comma splices and run-ons in your writing. Separate your sentences and punctuate them. When you say "locate," do you mean "relocate"?
- There are comma splices and run-ons in your writing.
- Separate your sentences and punctuate them.
- When you say "locate," do you mean "relocate"?
- Incidentally, the quotation marks aren't necessary.
- I want to relocate because of the excellent opportunity this new role would present to me.
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There are comma splices and run-ons in your writing. Separate your sentences and punctuate them.
When you say "locate," do you mean "relocate"? Incidentally, the quotation marks aren't necessary.
I want to relocate because of the excellent opportunity this new role would present to me. I am very interested in the responsibilities that would be afforded to me, and I believe that
When you say "locate," do you mean "relocate"? Incidentally, the quotation marks aren't necessary.
I want to relocate because of the excellent opportunity this new role would present to me. I am very interested in the responsibilities that would be afforded to me, and I believe that
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thanks,
I've fixed as below, How about this?
I want to relocate because of the excellent opportunity this new role would present to me. I am very interested in the responsibilities that would be afforded to me, and I believe that the role and responsibilities warrant my relocation. Additionally, relocation would provide me multiple opportunities to interact with different people in di
I've fixed as below, How about this?
I want to relocate because of the excellent opportunity this new role would present to me. I am very interested in the responsibilities that would be afforded to me, and I believe that the role and responsibilities warrant my relocation. Additionally, relocation would provide me multiple opportunities to interact with different people in di
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