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Kouroshh Posted 13 years ago
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Is this message written correctly?
Dear Professor Green
Thank you very much for spending time and writing a recommendation letter for me. I would like to inform you that your text has 2 mistakes. If you have time, I would greatly appreciate it if you could fix the text and submit a letter again. The aforementioned mistakes are ...
Thank you very much for spending time and writing a recommendation letter for me. I would like to inform you that your text has 2 mistakes. If you have time, I would greatly appreciate it if you could fix the text and submit a letter again. The aforementioned mistakes are ...
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That , my friend, is a bold request. I think I'd tame it down a bit. I would like to inform you that your text has two mistakes : I believe your text may have a couple of errors that should be corrected, if you have the time.
- That , my friend, is a bold request.
- I think I'd tame it down a bit.
- I would like to inform you that your text has two mistakes : I believe your text may have a couple of errors that should be corrected, if you have the time.
- I believe that the item is more often called a 'letter of recommendation'.
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That, my friend, is a bold request. I think I'd tame it down a bit. I would like to inform you that your text has two mistakes: I believe your text may have a couple of errors that should be corrected, if you have the time.
I believe that the item is more often called a 'letter of recommendation'.
I believe that the item is more often called a 'letter of recommendation'.
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Thank you very much for your feedback. Do you have any suggestion that how should I rephrase these sentences?
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kouroshhThank you very much for your feedback. Do you have any suggestion that how should I rephrase these sentences?Didn't I already offer suggestions?
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You mentioned that: I believe your text may have a couple of errors that should be corrected, if you have the time. That was the main reason I asked you because I do not know what is my mistakes except the letter of recommendation that you have already mentioned
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Philip is saying that you should use his sentence "I believe your text..." instead of your original statement "I would like to inform you..."
That WAS his suggestion.
That WAS his suggestion.
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I am very sorry. I didn't get that at first time. It was my misunderstanding 
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