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Mohamed Soufan 8586 Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Is this message correct?

Dear close friends, I would like to thank you for calling me, and I want to say sorry for those whom I didn't contact last month. I got the results from the hospital so contact me if you want to be updated.

Please let me know if the message above is correct and also rate my English from 0 to 10.
Thank you in advance!
  

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", but otherwise this is all correct, so it would be a 9 out of 10 I guess. Probably I would put a comma after "hospital". Note that "whom" is formally correct, but at the level of formality that is probably appropriate to your message, many people would write "who" instead.

  • ", but otherwise this is all correct, so it would be a 9 out of 10 I guess.
  • Probably I would put a comma after "hospital".
  • Note that "whom" is formally correct, but at the level of formality that is probably appropriate to your message, many people would write "who" instead.
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It should be "say sorry to those ...", but otherwise this is all correct, so it would be a 9 out of 10 I guess. Probably I would put a comma after "hospital".

Note that "whom" is formally correct, but at the level of formality that is probably appropriate to your message, many people would write "who" instead.
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Thank you very much GPY, it was a very helpful reply and I really appreciate your help.

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