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Kedra Posted 19 years ago
Business & Finance

Is this marketing text correct in grammar and style? Thanks!

1i00The passage aims at convincing the owners of small vacation rental websites that making deals with local service providers is a good income opportunity for them. Can you please take a professional look of native speaker at my masterpiece? 05000 Thank you in advance!02i02br
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01font00The owners of small rental websites can cooperate with local service providers and get good commission from this cooperation. For instance, they can agree on discounts with souvenir shops and hand out discount coupons to their guests. Discount coupons issued specially for a specific villa or house work best. The same can be done with restaurants, car hire and yacht rent services, and etc. No doubt, this will contribute to generating interest and building trust to your vacation rental website. Will you mind having more happy clients, who naturally turn to positive testimonials and 02font01font00word-of-mouth advertising?02font00 00 010id5
  

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1font 00The owners of small rental websites can cooperate with local service providers and get good commission from this cooperation. For instance, they can agree on discounts with souvenir shops and hand out discount coupons to their guests. Discount coupons issued specially for a specific villa or house work best.

  • 1font 00The owners of small rental websites can cooperate with local service providers and get good commission from this cooperation.
  • For instance, they can agree on discounts with souvenir shops and hand out discount coupons to their guests.
  • Discount coupons issued specially for a specific villa or house work best.
  • The same can be done with restaurants, car hire and yacht 01del 00rent02del 00 rental services, 01del 00and02del 00 etc.
  • 01del 00No doubt, this will02del 00 This will no doubt02font 01font 00 contribute to generating interest and building trust 01del 00to02del 00 on your vacation rental website.
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1font00The owners of small rental websites can cooperate with local service providers and get good commission from this cooperation. For instance, they can agree on discounts with souvenir shops and hand out discount coupons to their guests. Discount coupons issued specially for a specific villa or house work best. The same can be done with restaurants, car hire and yac
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0 Hi Tidus, thank you very much for your suggestions and corrections. I guess I would agree with placing the last sentence in the beginning. I appreciate your sharing your thoughts on this. [Y] 0-

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