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Creativeguru Posted 18 years ago
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Is this line correct grammatically

0 The journey of Religare from a new entrant to one of the leading financial services institutions of India in just a span of one year is fueled by the NAC advertising’s innovation media and strategy planning. 0-
  

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02br 00I think you may be trying to say too much in one sentence. 01i 00NAC advertising’s innovation media and strategy planning02i 00 is quite a mouthful! And it's somewhat difficult to get a clear idea of what it means.

  • 02br 00I think you may be trying to say too much in one sentence.
  • 01i 00NAC advertising’s innovation media and strategy planning02i 00 is quite a mouthful!
  • And it's somewhat difficult to get a clear idea of what it means.
  • 02br 00CJ 0-
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1i00 in a span of just one year02i00 is better.02br
00I think you may be trying to say too much in one sentence. 01i00NAC advertising’s innovation media and strategy planning02i00 is quite a mouthful! And it's somewhat difficult to get a clear idea of what it means. Maybe you could rewrite in two sentences and make the last part more cle

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