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Is this line correct grammatically
0 The journey of Religare from a new entrant to one of the leading financial services institutions of India in just a span of one year is fueled by the NAC advertising’s innovation media and strategy planning. 0-
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02 br 00 I think you may be trying to say too much in one sentence. 01 i 00 NAC advertising’s innovation media and strategy planning 02 i 00 is quite a mouthful! And it's somewhat difficult to get a clear idea of what it means.
- 02 br 00 I think you may be trying to say too much in one sentence.
- 01 i 00 NAC advertising’s innovation media and strategy planning 02 i 00 is quite a mouthful!
- And it's somewhat difficult to get a clear idea of what it means.
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1 i 00 in a span of just one year 02 i 00 is better. 02 br
00 I think you may be trying to say too much in one sentence. 01 i 00 NAC advertising’s innovation media and strategy planning 02 i 00 is quite a mouthful! And it's somewhat difficult to get a clear idea of what it means. Maybe you could rewrite in two sentences and make the last part more cle
00 I think you may be trying to say too much in one sentence. 01 i 00 NAC advertising’s innovation media and strategy planning 02 i 00 is quite a mouthful! And it's somewhat difficult to get a clear idea of what it means. Maybe you could rewrite in two sentences and make the last part more cle
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