Is this letter of motivation okay? I will appreciate it if you can correct it :)

Hello. I just wrote a motivation letter but I don't know how I did.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am a Dutch student who lived in Morocco for 15 years. I got my baccalaureate in 2006 and during the past four years, I studied English literature and human science at Hassan2 university in Casablanca. Although my previous studies were all in French, my English has always been improving more and more because I love the language and I was always practicing for I wanted to carry my studies in English. The emphasis of my university studies was to be able to analyze several literally, philosophical books and poems .But I also learned about other diverse topics such as linguistics ( psycholinguistics, sociolinguistics…), syntax, semantics, Mythology, philosophy..etc. I found the last topic philosophy to be very interesting and exciting because it helps you look at the world in a different wise way. I learned and read some inspirational books which helped me become a different person with different ambitions.

I came to the Netherlands on July 2011. I am currently a student at Inholland university, I did not realize that it was not a university but a school with a much lower level until when the first period was almost ending. It was too late for me to join a university, the only reasonable thing to do was to wait until September of 2012 in order to apply for a course in a University.

I would like to join your university for it has a good reputation all over Europe and abroad and the reason why I want to study Business economics is that after I got my Bachelor degree of Arts, I realized that I still have a plan of having a bachelor in business. This field of study has always been interesting to me because it is facing a challenging time nowadays with decline in its numbers due to the economic crisis. I can see myself in a professional field because I experienced it and knew that I can be a professional with strong abilities in the future .To further my career aspirations of becoming part of a senior management team, I want to obtain a knowledge in business economics. Having this knowledge will allow me to better understand the principles. With all the uncertainty and changes in this world whether political, economic, or technological, I believe that economics must have a solid understanding, supported by a strong academic foundation, of how to guide companies through these challenging times.



Armed with a solid understanding of academic principles, I can begin my career where I will add to my experience. Because I will be well versed in the theory and I will be able to adapt and modify the theoretical constructs as required in order to meet a company's needs. I fully recognize that our political, economic, and technological environments are constantly changing, and thus economics needs to be able to adapt quickly and accurately to the new conditions if the company is to survive, let alone prosper. I believe obtaining a business Degree will provide the necessary background for me to be able to anticipate and react to ever-changing environments.


Please find enclosed my CV, transcripts, IETLS score and diplomas. Should you need any further information please feel free to ask me. I am hoping for a positive answer and looking forward to hearing from you.