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Vimalpal Posted 13 years ago
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Dear Sir,
I would like to request you that kindly disconnect my Telephone Services of above mentioned telephone no. after 30 days from the date of this letter.
Hope you will do the needful assist in the above subject.

With Best Regards
  

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Dear Sir, I would like to request you that kindly you disconnect my telephone services of above mentioned (telephone number 888-999-9876) on 30 November 2013, and sent the final bill for settlement to the address on the account.. a fter 30 days from the date of this letter. Hope you will do the needful assist in the above subject.

  • Dear Sir, I would like to request you that kindly you disconnect my telephone services of above mentioned (telephone number 888-999-9876) on 30 November 2013, and sent the final bill for settlement to the address on the account..
  • a fter 30 days from the date of this letter.
  • Hope you will do the needful assist in the above subject.
  • Thank you, Mr.
  • John Doe.
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Dear Sir,
I would like to request you that kindly you disconnect my telephone services of above mentioned (telephone number 888-999-9876) on 30 November 2013, and sent the final bill for settlement to the address on the account.. after 30 days from the date of this letter.
Hope you will do the needful assist in t

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