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Dear mr ..



Thanks for getting back to me. Unfortunately since I filled the enquiry form in September 2011 things have changed. As the course I was hoping to start got full and was therefore was given the opportuntiy to study Access to HE Diploma (Health Care Professions) progression to Nursing, Midwifery and other health care degree. As the course was not suitable for an engineering student I started to finish off my BTEC National Diploma in Electrical Engineering.



WhilE I also applied for the HNC/HND Electrical Engineering at City of Glasgow College and hope to start in January 2012. During my phone interview with the tutors, they told me that I could possible enter university in June 2012 or contine for a HND Mechanical Engineering.

Therefore I wanted to know whether it is possible for me to enter the university with an HNC or if I should wait until I receive an HND and then enter. Also, while researching the course, I read that there is sometimes an arrangement between the college and the university. Would you be able to tell me whether such an arrangement exists in this case?

I also wanted to know if you accept BTEC National Diploma in Electrical Engineering ?

Thank you very much for your time and trouble.

Yours faithfully,

mr..