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Vimalpal Posted 13 years ago
Letter Writing
Is this letter Correct?
Dear Sir,
I would like to request you that kindly disconnect my Telephone Services of above mentioned telephone no. after 30 days from the date of this letter.
Hope you will do the needful assist in the above subject.
With Best Regards
I would like to request you that kindly disconnect my Telephone Services of above mentioned telephone no. after 30 days from the date of this letter.
Hope you will do the needful assist in the above subject.
With Best Regards
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vimalpal Dear Sir,I would like to request you that kindly disconnect my Telephone Services of above mentioned telephone no. With Best Regards Why make it so confusing? " and "after 30 days from thed ate of this letter"?
- vimalpal Dear Sir,I would like to request you that kindly disconnect my Telephone Services of above mentioned telephone no.
- With Best Regards Why make it so confusing?
- " and "after 30 days from thed ate of this letter"?
- Just say it plainly all at once.
- I would like to discontinue telephone service for 123-456-7890 as of November 29, 2013.
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vimalpalDear Sir,I would like to request you that kindly disconnect my Telephone Services of above mentioned telephone no. after 30 days from the date of this letter.Hope you will do the needful assist in the above subject.With Best RegardsWhy make it so confusing? "The above mentioned telephone no." and "after 30 days from thed ate of this letter"? Just say
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