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The office of the Mariners Collegian would like to recommend a new adviser who will take over for position of the outgoing adviser. Herewith are the names of the suggested teachers:

Ms. Lydia Cervantes
Mrs. Nenita Baldon
Mrs. Amoraphil Bales
Mr.Steven James Diño
Mr. Angelo Miranda
Ms. Bhrendalyn Bergancia

On account of the standard approach, the Editorial Board together with the adviser has chosen Mrs. Nenita Baldon to be next adviser of the Mariners' Collegian .With Mrs. Nenita Baldon knowledge as former adviser of the school publication at Saint Agnes Academy, she developed a strong sense of confidence with a delightful attitude. Therefore, she set to be the best example as an adviser of our organization.

Aside from the recommendation of a new adviser, the Editorial Board would like to request for a language critic who will perform the following duties:

• Shall extebd thorough editing before the paper is published;
• Shall give comments and suggestions for the improvement of the school paper;
Shall review all libelous, indecent and defamatory statements in the articles before they are published.

The language critic shall receive honorarium with the amount of ten thousand pesos (Php.10, 000) in the entire year.
The language critic may be restrained or be replaced only upon a motion or petition from at least 2/3 of the publication staff in good standing.



Respectfully Yours,

Mariners' Collegian Staffers