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Kak Serwan Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Is this letter appropriate?

Please find attached the file of incoming preliminary handover sent at your request.
  

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I t's clumsy business jargon. I suggest eg Here is the file you requested.

  • I t's clumsy business jargon.
  • I suggest eg Here is the file you requested.
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It's clumsy business jargon.

I suggest
eg Here is the file you requested.
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Kak SerwanPlease find attached...
I think that is unnecessary, and even a bit insulting.

Suppose you have the car keys in your hand and I see them and say: "Please find your car keys."?

Email attachments are similar, they are not lost, so you don't need to "find" them.

I would write:
Here is the preliminary handover document tha
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Thank you for your help.
Emotion: smile

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