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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
Grammar
Is this how you would write it?
She joins him at the couch and hands him a beer while having grabbed a soda for herself.
Is this how you would write it?
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I would delete the word "while" and put a comma after "beer". Check whether you mean "at the couch" or "on the couch".
- I would delete the word "while" and put a comma after "beer".
- Check whether you mean "at the couch" or "on the couch".
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I would delete the word "while" and put a comma after "beer".
Check whether you mean "at the couch" or "on the couch".
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