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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
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is this grammtically correct?

This is Nhan. Hope you're doing well. I received a list of businesses from public works that are currently operating in the City of Powder Springs. We have almost 600 businesses in P.S. And, the list is included with types of business, address, and contact information. Would you let me know how should I proceed next? and have you heard from Mr. Leamon Scott?




I would like to talk to you some of my works because I believe it will assist our process of becoming a Entrepreneurship Friendly Community. I'll call you and we can discuss more on this.




Thank you for your time and support.
  

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Hi, Here are some suggestions. Clive This is Nhan. <<< Not really necessary.

  • Hi, Here are some suggestions.
  • Clive This is Nhan.
  • <<< Not really necessary.
  • Just put your name at the end Hope you're doing well.
  • I received a list from public works of businesses that are currently operating in the City of Powder Springs.
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Hi,

Here are some suggestions.

Clive

This is Nhan. <<< Not really necessary. Just put your name at the end Hope you're doing well. I received a list from public works of businesses that are currently operating in the City of Powder Springs. There are almost 600.

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