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Ayan86 Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Is this grammatically sound?

Hi!

Are there any mistakes here?

The memory of the great Italian cultural and art figures who lived in Tallin in the early 20th century is preserved here carefully. Juzeppe I. appeared in the opera theater of Tallin, Giovanni U., Vinsent G. and George H. created their works of arts in Tallin.

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I would use the plural " memories " because you mention many different figures. The second sentence has a comma splice.

  • I would use the plural " memories " because you mention many different figures.
  • The second sentence has a comma splice.
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I would use the plural "memories" because you mention many different figures.
The second sentence has a comma splice.

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