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Ayan86 Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Is this grammatically fine?

Hi there!

Is my sentence grammatically fine?

In the performance of the request, the office ensured for the representatives of the French Republic who participated in the procedural activities translation into French of verbal testimonies given by persons, as well as ensured both written and verbal translation from French of questions to be asked to persons under interrogation.

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Not quite. Say eg In the performance of the request, the office ensured comma for the representatives of the French Republic who participated in the procedural activities comma translation into French of verbal testimonies given by persons , as well as ensured both written and verbal translation from French of questions to be asked of to persons under interrogation. Really, it would be better to rewrite this into two or more shorter sentences.

— Clive

  • Not quite.
  • Say eg In the performance of the request, the office ensured comma for the representatives of the French Republic who participated in the procedural activities comma translation into French of verbal testimonies given by persons , as well as ensured both written and verbal translation from French of questions to be asked of to persons under interrogation.
  • Really, it would be better to rewrite this into two or more shorter sentences.
  • In the performance of the request Do you perhaps mean 'As requested'?
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Not quite.
Say eg In the performance of the request, the office ensured comma for the representatives of the French Republic who participated in the procedural activities comma translation into French of verbal testimonies given by persons, as well as ensured both written and verbal translation fr
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