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Nancy19820 Posted 20 years ago
Grammar
Is this grammatically correct? Would you help me say this in a better way?
Thank you in advance for your help.
We, the City and the citizens are interested in having a ABC. And, a couple of weeks ago, I sent to you the information why our City is a great place for ABC, as a next development location. Today, I am calling to see if you recieved the package. Also, we want to know what we can do for you to open a new ABC in our City.
We, the City and the citizens are interested in having a ABC. And, a couple of weeks ago, I sent to you the information why our City is a great place for ABC, as a next development location. Today, I am calling to see if you recieved the package. Also, we want to know what we can do for you to open a new ABC in our City.
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We, (city name) and its citizens, are interested in having an ABC located in our city. Two weeks ago, I sent you information about why (city name) is a great place for your next ABC location. Today, I am calling to see if you have rec ei ved the package and to ask what else we can do to attract an ABC to (city name) .
- We, (city name) and its citizens, are interested in having an ABC located in our city.
- Two weeks ago, I sent you information about why (city name) is a great place for your next ABC location.
- Today, I am calling to see if you have rec ei ved the package and to ask what else we can do to attract an ABC to (city name) .
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We, (city name) and its citizens, are interested in having an ABC located in our city. Two weeks ago, I sent you information about why (city name) is a great place for your next ABC location. Today, I am calling to see if you have received the package and to ask what else we can do to attract an ABC to (city name).
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We, the City and the citizens are interested in having a ABC. And, a couple of weeks ago, I sent to you the information why our City is a great place for ABC, as a next development location. Today, I am calling to see if you recieved the package. Also, we want to know what we can do for you to open a new ABC in our City.
Here is the corrected text:
A couple of weeks ago, I wrote
Here is the corrected text:
A couple of weeks ago, I wrote
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