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Amy, I don't mind you canvassing for the X party as that is your choice but please don't do so as representing all of us external students. The sms you sent us have made rounds on whatsapp and facebook and as a result the internal students have come to think that we are conspiring against them to get more benefits.
To be honest there was no rift between internal students and external students in the first place, and what you are doing now is creating problems that wasnt there in the first place.
  

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Amy, I don’t mind you canvassing for the X party, as that is your choice; but please don’t do so as though representing all of us external students. The sms you sent us have made the rounds on whatsapp and Facebook ; and as a result the internal students have come to think (been led to believe) that we are conspiring against them to get more benefits. To be honest, there was no rift between internal and external students initially , and what you are doing now is creating problems that weren’t there before.

  • Amy, I don’t mind you canvassing for the X party, as that is your choice; but please don’t do so as though representing all of us external students.
  • The sms you sent us have made the rounds on whatsapp and Facebook ; and as a result the internal students have come to think (been led to believe) that we are conspiring against them to get more benefits.
  • To be honest, there was no rift between internal and external students initially , and what you are doing now is creating problems that weren’t there before.
  • Come to think = been led to believe (suggested options).
  • I'm not familiar with whatsapp - it may need to be capitalized.
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Amy, I don’t mind you canvassing for the X party, as that is your choice; but please don’t do so as though representing all of us external students. The sms you sent us have made the rounds on whatsapp and Facebook; and as a result the internal students have come to think (been led to believe) that we are conspiring against them to get more benefits.
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