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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Is this grammatically correct?

It might seem as if she lets everything slide, but the truth is it's just an illusion. For example, when someone orders her to do something, she just nods and smiles and then does whatever she wants with not only the person, but everyone being none the wiser.
  

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Anonymous Is this grammatically correct? Almost, but you are stretching the reader's patience if you don't revise for conciseness: It might seem that she lets everything slide , but it's just an illusio n. When someone orders her to do something, she just nods and smiles and does whatever she wants, with no one the wiser.

  • Anonymous Is this grammatically correct?
  • Almost, but you are stretching the reader's patience if you don't revise for conciseness: It might seem that she lets everything slide , but it's just an illusio n.
  • When someone orders her to do something, she just nods and smiles and does whatever she wants, with no one the wiser.
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AnonymousIs this grammatically correct?
Almost, but you are stretching the reader's patience if you don't revise for conciseness:

It might seem that she lets everything slide, but it's just an illusion. When someone orders her to do something, she just nods and smiles and does whatever she wants, with no one the wiser

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