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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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The fact people are arguing on facebook about which tragedy is worse, the lack of media coverage of other tragedies and putting up posts mocking 'Pray for Paris' statuses when there are only a handful of posts condemning the terrorists goes on to show how messed up the world has become. All lives matter.
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I'm not criticizing the length of the thought but perhaps a little punctuation would not be amiss. The expression is "goes to show", I believe. Would this work?
- I'm not criticizing the length of the thought but perhaps a little punctuation would not be amiss.
- The expression is "goes to show", I believe.
- Would this work?
- The fact people are arguing on Facebook about which tragedy is worse, the lack of media coverage of other tragedies and putting up posts mocking 'Pray for Paris' statuses-- when there are only a handful of posts condemning the terrorists-- goes (on) to show how messed up the world has become.
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I'm not criticizing the length of the thought but perhaps a little punctuation would not be amiss.
The expression is "goes to show", I believe.
Would this work?
The fact people are arguing on Facebook about which tragedy is worse,
the lack of media coverage of other tragedies
and putting up posts mocking 'Pray for Paris' statuses--
when there are only a handful of posts c
The expression is "goes to show", I believe.
Would this work?
The fact people are arguing on Facebook about which tragedy is worse,
the lack of media coverage of other tragedies
and putting up posts mocking 'Pray for Paris' statuses--
when there are only a handful of posts c
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