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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Loong joins a loan shark syndicate to provide for his family at the expense of his relationship with his sister, who enrolled in police academy instead.
  

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— Loong joins a loan shark syndicate to provide for his fam ily, a t the expense of his relationship with his sister, who had enrolled in the police academy instead.

  • — Loong joins a loan shark syndicate to provide for his fam ily, a t the expense of his relationship with his sister, who had enrolled in the police academy instead.
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Perhaps you mean this?—

Loong joins a loan shark syndicate to provide for his family, at the expense of his relationship with his sister, who had enrolled in the police academy instead.
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Yes, thank you for your help.

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