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Mgwattoo Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

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I often try to dig out what I love, what I hate, and what doesn’t really mean anything to me. Every time, the only similarity I could come up with was cinema.
  

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Your text needs a few changes. I often try to figure out what I love, what I hate, and what doesn’t really mean anything to me. Every time, the only similarity I can come up with is the cinema.

  • Your text needs a few changes.
  • I often try to figure out what I love, what I hate, and what doesn’t really mean anything to me.
  • Every time, the only similarity I can come up with is the cinema.
  • The word 'similarity' is odd here.
  • Do you mean that you love the cinema, you hate the cinema, and the cinema doesn't really mean anything to you?
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Your text needs a few changes.

I often try to figure out what I love, what I hate, and what doesn’t really mean anything to me. Every time, the only similarity I can come up with is the cinema.

The word 'similarity' is odd here. Do you mean that you love the cinema, you hate the cinema, and the

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