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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Is this grammatically correct?

I'm making a PowerPoint for English and am wondering if this is correct:

Should people buy this?

Personally, no, It is not worth having health issues and there is nothing fun in vomiting and making poor decisions which may cost you your life. However if people decide to drink then they should do so responsibly and know about the potential consequences both in drinking and their choices.
  

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Should people buy this? Personally, I think not, It is not worth damaging your health, and there is no fun in vomiting and making poor and possibly fatal decisions. However if people decide to drink, then they should do so responsibly and understand the potential consequences.

  • Should people buy this?
  • Personally, I think not, It is not worth damaging your health, and there is no fun in vomiting and making poor and possibly fatal decisions.
  • However if people decide to drink, then they should do so responsibly and understand the potential consequences.
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Should people buy this?

Personally, I think not, It is not worth damaging your health, and there is no fun in vomiting and making poor and possibly fatal decisions. However if people decide to drink, then they should do so responsibly and understand the potential consequences.

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