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Fatima55 Posted 12 years ago
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The participants in the present study also made some comments about writing reflective journals in all of the courses of teacher education programs. For example, they considered writing reflections as a chance for looking for a research topic or having difficulty writing up their proposals or theses and get rid of rote learning as well.
  

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The first sentence is a bit ambiguous. Did they make the comments in the courses, or did they suggest journal writing to those participating in the courses? Maybe you could break the second sentence into a few sentences as well to make your meaning clearer.

  • The first sentence is a bit ambiguous.
  • Did they make the comments in the courses, or did they suggest journal writing to those participating in the courses?
  • Maybe you could break the second sentence into a few sentences as well to make your meaning clearer.
  • If you like, try writing it again and I will look at it again, because I'm actually not sure what meaning you're trying to convey.
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The first sentence is a bit ambiguous. Did they make the comments in the courses, or did they suggest journal writing to those participating in the courses?

Maybe you could break the second sentence into a few sentences as well to make your meaning clearer. If you like, try writing it again and I will look at it again, because I'm actually not sure what meaning you're trying to convey.

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