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MelonieG Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Is this grammatically correct
This would defeat the purpose of teaching when students’ enthusiasm for learning gets diminished or squashed altogether by the redundancy of corrections.
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I would change the subject from "this" to the main point of the sentence. It makes a more powerful statement. This would defeat T he purpose of teaching is defeated when students’ enthusiasm for learning gets diminished or squashed altogether by the redundancy of repeated corrections.
- I would change the subject from "this" to the main point of the sentence.
- It makes a more powerful statement.
- This would defeat T he purpose of teaching is defeated when students’ enthusiasm for learning gets diminished or squashed altogether by the redundancy of repeated corrections.
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I would change the subject from "this" to the main point of the sentence. It makes a more powerful statement.
This would defeatThe purpose of teaching is defeated when students’ enthusiasm for learning gets diminished or squashed altogether by the redundancy of repeated corrections.
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