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We noticed that the carpet roll delivered was found to be damaged, it contains 25 meters roll length which 15 meter of carpet is unusable because it was found to be stained and torn at the 7, 12 & 15 meter length.

'We noticed' makes the matter sound minor and unimportant.
You need to be more direct.

Enoon · Accepted Answer

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The 25-meter carpet roll delivered was found to be damaged. Fifteen meters of it is unusable because it is stained and torn at 7, 12 and 15 meters.

Clive · Answer

We noticed that the carpet roll delivered was found to be damaged, it contains 25 meters roll length which 15 meter of carpet is unusable because it was found to be stained and torn at the 7, 12 & 15 meter length.

'We noticed' makes the matter sound minor and unimportant.
You need to be more direct.

I suggest this.
The carpet roll you delivered is damaged. It is 25 meters long, of which 15 meters is unusable because it is stained and torn at the 7, 12 and 15 meter points.

Clive

Camsians · Answer

We noticed that carpet roll which was found to be damaged, it was contained 25 meters roll length which of 15 meter of carpet was unusable because it was found to be stained and torn at the 7,12 and 15 meter length.

AlpheccaStars · Answer

camsiansWe noticed that carpet roll which was found to be damaged, it was contained 25 meters roll length which of 15 meter of carpet was unusable because it was found to be stained and torn at the 7,12 and 15 meter length.

Camsians: Your sentences are not grammatically correct. You do not have a good command of English. Please check your grammar books before you reply to anyone's questions.

Camsians · Answer

Thanks for guiding me.

Anonymous · Answer

Thank you for your help

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